Pureblood/Purestar

[Pureblood]

This will hoepfully be the leader of OceanClan

Name:Purestar
Clan:OceanClan
Gender:Male
Moons:26 (sorry he's quite a young cat, just coming into his prime. how many moons would that be?)
Overview of Pelt:Black and tan pelt
Full Pelt:A shint short coated b;lack pelt with a tan snipe going up from his nose etending to his forehead. Tan paws and tan tipped tail. Looks very mych like a roteweiler or deobermann patternings. He has ice blue eyes with a scar or his left eye. That eye is NOT blind. The scar is not all that prominent.
Personality:He is very tough but he is fair, loyal and kind. Doesn't jump to conculsunsions easily. Expert fighter since he had to fight alot when he was a kit to get noticed, repsected by many cats.
History:When Purestar was a kit he was called Purekit but his warrior name Pureblood was because of the many fights he got into. He was a fustrated and misunderstood creature teased by many but all that stopped wwhen he prooved himself against a badger. Risking everything for his clan
In Character Example:Purestar roamed the camp, ice eyes searching for any unusual faults. His ears twitched at a rustle in a bush. Tensinf his powerful muscles, the male frooze and then shot forawrds into the bush. His calws shot out and pinned the creature that had altered him, he was rewarded with a suprised yowl. He looked down in suprise and a smile flowed over his features. "Oh, it's only you." he purred
Password:starshine

[-[ tansaliee ]-]

This is really far too short. Add more details and make each category at least two paragraphs, though I suggest doing three in history. Remember, a paragraph is FIVE GOOD LONG SENTENCES. not short, snappy ones. And please make it saying 'he has tan paws and tan tipped tail.' instead of 'Tan paws and a tan tipped tail.' In the history, tell about who his mother, father, siblings, mentor, and friends were.

There is already a leader of OceanClan, Emberstar. All leader positions are full.

So this bio, is, as of now:

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