Ochurestar-Breezeclan

[roan]

Name:// Ochurestar
(Ochurekit, Ochurepaw, Ochurefur. Ochurestar)
Clan:// Breezeclan

Gender:// she-cat

Moons:// 46 moons

Overview of Pelt:// Ochurestar is a pale peach Siberian with long fur and green eyes.

Full Pelt:// Ochurestar is the exact opposite of her name which is a fancy word for a deep clay red color. Her coat is a long pale white/peach with lighter paws. She could be considered a tabby for her long darker tan stripes that flows from her neck down to the tip of her plumy tail. Her fur ruffles around her neck, giving her a nononsense air. She has long whiskers that can detect the smallest movement near her. Her eyes are a glowing amber-green. They resemble moons that float in a lake of ice with golden flecks. Her limbs are long and strong, she has a talent for running long distances easily.

Her head is small and her features are delicate. Her nose is pink and the fur on her face is white-tipped giving her a cute look. Her neck is slender, but looks short and fat, thanks to her long, ruffled fur. Her chest is thin and balanced, with a tuft of blonde fur sticking out. Her front legs are flexible. The claws are quite long and are the color of brazen obsidian. Her belly is thin and her ribs aren't prominent because of the fur there, but she isn't a big eater. Her hind legs are powerful and long, with enough muscles to scare any fox away. Her tail is long and plumy with hairs reaching a mouselength away from it.

Personality:// Ochurestar is a quiet she-cat that rarely fights. She loves kits and wishes to have some of her own, which is virtually inmpossible. She has a vibrant imagination that can come up with extraordinary ideas. She is closer to Starclan than a normal leader, relying on them for her strength and courage. She hates getting her fur wet, and especially fears deep water. She is an exceptional runner and has a natural talent for hunting.
Normally Ochurestar is a peaceful cat who looks for a peaceful solution to a problem. But if her clan is in danger; she will fight like a demon possessed. Ochurestar tries to use justice and looks at both sides of a story, before making a decision. But eventhough she would never harm a hair on a kit's head, she is very stern with apprentices and warriors, expecting nothing but the best in her clan. She likes to spend alot of her time thinking. She can be found studying a frog or watching a sunset, her thoughts far away. She dislikes rogues and they are probably the only cats who don't recieve her normally kind attitude. She doesn't care for kittypets, and will send them on their way with a mouse or two and directions back to the Twolegs.

History://

Ochurekit
Ochurekit was born in Breezeclan, a loyal cat to the end. Her mother was timid and shy, she rarely spoke a word. Ochurekit's brother, Onyxkit, got most of that quiet temperment. But Ochurekit's father was a proud warrior who was the first to put forth his oponion. He taught Ochurekit the need for loyalty and justice, sensing the leader-like traits in his first kit. Others sensed it too. She was the first to pick which leader she was in the kit games. She was the first to choose fresh-kill, but little Ochurekit always shared it with Onyxkit, who hardly ever stood up for himself. Starclan help the kit who even looked wrong at Onyxkit, because Ochurekit was right there, always by his side, telling everyone how much she cared for him and how he would make a great deputy for her.
Ochurepaw
When made apprentices, Ochurepaw was given to the Dogfrost, the deputy to teach. He taught her how to fight and many other things. But he barely had to teach her how to hunt. He only refined her skills. Hunting came to little Ochurepae easily. She was the smallest apprentice in the den, but she was the first to come back with fresh-kill. Dogfrost was constantly testing her. Often he would have another warrior tell her to go hunt at the Gorge. He would watch her, hidden as she hunted or climbed a tree. When she finished, he would come out and tell her how she did and how she could improve. He also put her against other warriors and apprentices so she could learn how to deal with different cat's fighting personalities. Ochurepaw was made a warrior after she battled a badger and saved a wounded warrior's life.
Ochurefur
Ochurefur was a great warrior. She instantly made friends with the other clans, thanks to her thoughtful words and good decisions. She fell in love with an older warrior, of whom she hoped would return her affections. She was deeply disappointed. The old warrior was ashamed to have such a new warrior following him and he rejected her harshly. So great was her rage and grief was that she attacked him. Pent-up emotion let free, she left him lying near death with scars lining his flanks. Ochurefur was never traced to the scars, and everyone assumed he had been attacked by the badger's grown cubs. The older warrior was killed by a monster. Ochurefur was so deeply betrayed and had lost so much, she decided to totally devote herself to her clan and never place her affections so deeply in case she might get hurt.
Ochurefur/Deputy
About five seasons after this incident the old deputy was ready to retire and the leader had to choose a new deputy. All of the young warriors worked hard to see who could make it, but the choice was rather obivous. The deputy's own apprentice, Ochurefur was the main patrol leader, always brought in fresh-kill and never let prejuidice or pride get in way of her judgement. The clan respected the she-cat. Once deputy, Ochurefur was instantly down to business. Seeing that the leader was close to joining Starclan himself and was getting sicker every day, she began to do it all herself. She put apprentices to their mentors, helped pick names for kits, picked out patrols, led battles and was practically the leader when the current leader did die.
Ochurestar
The clan celebrated her as their new leader. She traveled to the Moonstone with Onyxspider and Dogfrost, her brother and mentor. She endured the painful but exciting experience well, even though she had to rest after it. She recieved her first prophecy then, about a rogue band. What it had meant was a cat in the clan was connected to them. She later found out by searching the rogue terras and finding a pure black stone near s spiderweb. That told her that Onyxspider was in contact with the rogues. She put an end to that, but how they were connected is another story. She has led the clan well for the past three moons of her leadership.

In Character Example:// The morning was early and dew was still dripping from the weeds. The sun was just peeking over the edge and the moon was still shredding a few last rays of silver light. Clouds barely dotted the sky, because of the stormy night it had been. Trees had been blown over and leaves were scattered everywhere. Ochurepaw ached for the forest. All of the destroyed plants had once thrived, producing large fruit and home for millions of different creatures. But they would have to find another home now. Ochurepaw shrugged and broke into a trot. She had told her mentor she was going for a walk and would stay close to the plain, where she could easily flee danger, unlike that solitary, cooped-up forest that she disliked. She had barely approached the lone trees when a yowl and a screech broke the silence. Ochurepaw recognized the warrior who had screamed. Frogleap! Her heart lept into her throat. The young warrior had been her good friend as an apprentice. He was so proud of his name and he had a long life in front of him. She broke into a run, darting into the forest. She came bursting onto the sight and gasped. A large tree had fallen on the badger's den across the borders on Oceanclan's terra. The badger snarled, his huge bulk blocking Ochurepaw's way to the wounded warrior. He was exhausted and blood trickled from his leg onto the dusty den floor. The stench of badger dirt, cat blood, sweat, and deathberry nearly made Ochurepaw puke. Please let me defeat this monster and save my clan mate! She prayed up to Starclan before evaluating the growling badger. As he had shown with the wounded warrior, he was no pup to kid about. But as she noticed, he was very hasty and didn't stop to think about anything. She could use this to her advantage. She began to limp, letting her right fore sag and she hop-skipped to the right a few paces. Eagerly the badger lunged, mouth agape for the kill. Ochurepaw whirled to the right, her eyes watering from the dst that rose from the badger's paws. Caught unawares, she was flipped over. The badger growled in delight and lashed at her belly for the killing blow. But Ochurepaw wasn't over yet. She wriggled under his belly and ripped with her back claws. Latching onto his throat with her front claws, she lashed and tore at his belly until the badger groaned and fell. Ochurepaw heaved herself out from under him and scrambled over to the wound warrior.

"Frogleap, are you alright?" The warrior nodded wearily and dropped out in a dead faint. Ochurepaw groaned. There was no way she was going to be able to carry him back. The young she-cat dropped down beside him and panted for a moment, her eyes closed.

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[-[ tansaliee ]-]

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